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[293] Collab Adopt [closed]

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Hello everyone! This is a collab adopt BlueBri and I made. I drew it, while she designed her.  We decided to hold an auction for her.

Rules:
- You may not resell the character for a higher amount of money than you paid.
- If you trade/resell her, please tell me the owner.
- Serious bidders only, which means bid only if you have the money.
- You may edit the design in any way after you have bought them.
- Do not claim the design as your own.
- Please credit me and BlueBri when needed.
- Please reply to the highest bidder.
- Payment must be made withing 48 hours, half to me and half to BlueBri
- Ends 48h after the last bid.
- I will send the original PNG file to you once you have paid us.

Auction:
SB: 500 Points
MI: 50 Points
AB: 3000 Points
Image size
2865x3473px 3.43 MB
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HoneyHelmet
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

It's a very lovely drawing, but i think it would be a good idea to work on the anatomy /clothes a bit more? Since the legs seem unrealistically attached to the body, the arms seem to be bending weird, the folds are not making much sense... ect.

Your coloring is absolutely gorgeous, and i love the vibe and warmth you have put into this piece!
And i can see you have put a lot of time into learning to color. BUT i think it would be more important for u to focus on the "sketch" itself.
The design is fine overall, the hair seems to have too many accessories going on tho, making it feel a bit crowded? if that makes sense?

Things that might help you could be gesture drawing:
reference.sketchdaily.net/en/

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